When I cry you help me out
When I'm happy you hear me shout
When I glare you know I'm really mad
Because you are my best friend
You can tell when I'm sad.
You're there in thick and thin
You know you can always make me grin
You help me out when I get mad
You are the bestest friend I've ever had
So hear me out when I say
You’re the light in my day
You are the moon in my night
You make everything right
And if you ever leave…
I'll be with you wherever you go.
The rhyming in this poem really works. All the rhymes make sense and most of the lines flow. Your voice in this poem is really good. I like it alot.
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